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July 7, 2008

domestic disturbance

Filed under: poetry, narike lintvelt — ABRAXAS @ 5:53 pm

one gin too many
one pun too funny
their words are arrows
that strike to the marrow

his fist in her face
explodes womb-red behind her eyes
punch-drunk they pace
a grotesque tango of accusations and lies

her throat between his hands
he squeezes until all grows faint and dark
breathe.. breathe in.. breathing quicksand
the tiles so cold, the overhead light stark

somewhere someone’s banging on the door
she hoists herself up from the floor
his badge glints in the moonlight
thank you, inspector, everything’s alright

the next morning her smile is in place
she wears too much concealer on her face
her sons are laughing and rolling on the lawn
Saartjie is clattering dishes in the sink,
her headscarf bright as the dawn
tell me, Saartjie, as one who prays, do you think
that God’s grace truly goes on and on?

5 Responses to “domestic disturbance”

  1. Lebohang Says:

    What a great piece, it has been a long time since I laid eyes on such a great read. Wonderful.

  2. narike Says:

    thank you so much, lebohang

  3. tumelo khoza Says:

    wow! as a woman who stands just besides this box of abuse and not inside as some of our unfortunate sisters do, this poem has opened my understanding once again and shown me that sight never sees beyond vision, hence one needs such INsight to know and hopefully write more poems to encourage and fortunately save our women, one female at a time, from the tyranny they are forced to consume emotionally and the pain they are made to digest.

    thank you for the inspiration.

    much lyrical love, tumelo.

  4. narike Says:

    thank you, tumelo
    let us hope that abused women will speak out and speak up and continue to do so until the choir of voices can no longer be drowned…

  5. Joop Says:

    Watter een van die “fokkers” was dit?

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